Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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With the advent of technology and advancement in our ability to communicate worldwide, the tourism industry has seen a boost, overall. Tourism has a different meaning for everyone, individually. Some go out to explore the art, architecture, culture and traditions. Some are mesmerized by the beauty of Mother Nature. And, the list goes on. As a tourist and explorer of different cultures myself, I believe it depends all upon the people of the host country, how they want their cultures to be represented. And, since I have mostly seen people being immensely warm and amiable, I would disagree strongly with the mentioned statement. Coming from different cultures, we all have our uniqueness;

that is

what makes us “different”. And, people who travel and explore other countries, are generally very much aware of

this

fact. Seeing the differences from a distance on TV or social media, makes things supremely prejudiced.

However

, being in the country, around the people and living in their shoes, makes one actually see why they have certain principles or ways.

This

, of course, rather than creating tensions, creates understanding. It creates a sense of coexisting. So, with the boost in international tourism, people have started seeing

world

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the world

from a gentler angle.

However

, every person is a representative of his country and his own culture. It is right in their hands to either make someone’s experience so good that they want to come back. Or, so bad that makes them want to agree with the above statement.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Some people regard video games as harmless fun , or even as a believe that videos games useful educational tool . Otherse people who play them . In your are having an adverse effect on t opinion , do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits ?

Some people think the government should subsidize fruit and vegetables to make healthy food more affordable. Other argue that the government should tax unhealthy food instead. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue