Some people say young people should be encouraged to leave their family when they become adults while some argue they should live for a longer time with their family. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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younger ones.

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family for work when they become adults, I think that they should live with

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family for a longer

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points. On the one hand, younger people move to l

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larger

cities leaving their family for better o

ppurtunities.

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunities

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to that the continuous rat race in

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life does not allow them to spend

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with the family as they live in different places.

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resulting a long gap between the own son/daughter and the parents.

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, a recent survey shows that 80% of the young

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in a country are leaving their parents and migrating to cities i

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in order to fulfil their

in order fulfill their

in order fulfil their

inorder fulfil their

high-flying career.

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, it is apparent that these

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children are not getting the opportunity and

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for

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own family and leaving them when t

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become adults.

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does not mean that y

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the younger generation

younger generations

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should leave

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family completely. w

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Working

close to the native places will not make them leave

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parents and learning the techniques like

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management and work-life balance will make them live with their family f

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a long

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.

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to that, it is y

ounger one's responsibility

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the younger one's responsibility

to look after their own family as they grow older.

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, most of the people who are working in bigger cities are bringing

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families along with them to live for a long

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, it is important that younger people should always stay with

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third

family to live happily. To conclude

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the younger

generation

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gets less

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to spend with family, I believe that they should not leave their family when they become adults as it is

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hier

of them or themselves

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own responsibility to take care of them. In the future, one should should never leave their family.