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Some people say young people should be encouraged to leave their family when they become adults while some argue they should live for a longer time with their family. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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These days, many people s
pend
Suggestion
are spending
less
time
 with
t
hier
of them or themselves
their
parents not only adults but
also
 younger ones.
Although
 I agree that people are leaving
t
hier
of them or themselves
their
family for work when they become adults, I think that they should live with
t
hier
of them or themselves
their
family for a longer
time
.
This
 essay will discuss
this
 issue examples to support arguments and d
emostrate
give an exhibition of to an interested audience
demonstrate
points. On the one hand, younger people move to l
arge
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larger
cities leaving their family for better o
ppurtunities.
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
In addition
 to that the continuous rat race in
t
hier
of them or themselves
their
life does not allow them to spend
t
hier
of them or themselves
their
there
time
 with the family as they live in different places.
Thus
 resulting a long gap between the own son/daughter and the parents.
For example
, a recent survey shows that 80% of the young
generation
 in a country are leaving their parents and migrating to cities i
norder fulfill their
Suggestion
in order to fulfil their
in order fulfill their
in order fulfil their
inorder fulfil their
high-flying career.
Therefore
, it is apparent that these
generation
 children are not getting the opportunity and
time
 for
t
hier
of them or themselves
their
own family and leaving them when t
hey
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They
become adults.
However
,
this
 does not mean that y
ounger
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the younger generation
younger generations
generation
 should leave
t
hier
of them or themselves
their
family completely. w
orking
Suggestion
Working
close to the native places will not make them leave
t
hier
of them or themselves
their
parents and learning the techniques like
time
 management and work-life balance will make them live with their family f
or
Suggestion
For
a long
time
.
In addition
 to that, it is y
ounger one's responsibility
Suggestion
the younger one's responsibility
to look after their own family as they grow older.
For instance
, most of the people who are working in bigger cities are bringing
t
hier
of them or themselves
their
families along with them to live for a long
time
.
Therefore
, it is important that younger people should always stay with
t
hier
of them or themselves
their
third
family to live happily. To conclude
,
Accept space
,
although
 the younger
generation
 gets less
time
 to spend with family, I believe that they should not leave their family when they become adults as it is
t
hier
of them or themselves
their
own responsibility to take care of them. In the future, one should should never leave their family.

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