Some people say young people should be encouraged to leave their family when they become adults while some argue they should live for a longer time with their family. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, many people s
pend
less Suggestion
are spending
time
with t
hier
parents not only adults but of them or themselves
their
also
younger ones. Although
I agree that people are leaving t
hier
family for work when they become adults, I think that they should live with of them or themselves
their
t
hier
family for a longer of them or themselves
their
time
. This
essay will discuss this
issue examples to support arguments and demostrate
points.
On the one hand, younger people move to lgive an exhibition of to an interested audience
demonstrate
arge
cities leaving their family for better oSuggestion
larger
ppurtunities.
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
In addition
to that the continuous rat race in t
hier
life does not allow them to spend of them or themselves
their
t
hier
of them or themselves
their
there
time
with the family as they live in different places. Thus
resulting a long gap between the own son/daughter and the parents. For example
, a recent survey shows that 80% of the young generation
in a country are leaving their parents and migrating to cities inorder fulfill their
high-flying career. Suggestion
in order to fulfil their
in order fulfill their
in order fulfil their
inorder fulfil their
Therefore
, it is apparent that these generation
children are not getting the opportunity and time
for t
hier
own family and leaving them when
tof them or themselves
their
hey
become adults.
Suggestion
They
However
, this
does not mean that younger
Suggestion
the younger generation
younger generations
generation
should leave t
hier
family completely. wof them or themselves
their
orking
close to the native places will not make them leave Suggestion
Working
t
hier
parents and learning the techniques like of them or themselves
their
time
management and work-life balance will make them live with their family
for
a long Suggestion
For
time
. In addition
to that, it is younger one's responsibility
to look after their own family as they grow older. Suggestion
the younger one's responsibility
For instance
, most of the people who are working in bigger cities are bringing t
hier
families along with them to live for a long of them or themselves
their
time
. Therefore
, it is important that younger people should always stay with t
hier
family to live happily.
To conclude of them or themselves
their
third
,
Accept space
,
although
the younger generation
gets less time
to spend with family, I believe that they should not leave their family when they become adults as it is t
hier
own responsibility to take care of them. In the future, one should should never leave their family.of them or themselves
their
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- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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