News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats your opinion about it?

In recent years, the dissemination of news stories globally had been
enhance
Suggestion
enhanced
with pictures. There is no doubt that some people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
that pictures are more
affective
producing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect
effective
than words.
This
essay will discuss both
side
Suggestion
sides
of the argument and take a stand.
Firstly
, both
TV
and
newspaper
are the major media for passing
information
from point A to
piont
a geometric element that has position but no extension
point
pint
B with an enhanced good quality
pictures
Suggestion
picture
. The two media helps the locals to get
information
at their disposal,
for example
in the rural area, the ruler
usually have
Suggestion
usually has
a
TV
, where the local can assemble to listen to common program of choice,
also
the most learned person
person
Suggestion
people
persons
among them can disseminate the
newspaper
news to them, by reading and passing the knowledge to them in the local
dialete
the usage or vocabulary that is characteristic of a specific group of people
dialect
.
Secondly
, the
TV
can be
use
Suggestion
used
to
dissemate
cause to become widely known
disseminate
information
faster with clearer picture to
majority
Suggestion
the majority
of people than
newspaper
, but on the other hands
newspaper
can be more compare to the
TV
new with a specific time duration.
For
example more
Accept comma addition
example, more
content can be given in the
news paper
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspaper
with less picture quality than
TV
with less time duration but more picture quality.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
newspaper
is
easy
Suggestion
easily
mobile compare to the
TV
news. In conclusion, both
TV
and
newspaper
are good media for educating the
populess
people in general considered as a whole
populace
about
situation
Suggestion
the situation
a situation
in a particular place, in my opinion people get more
information
pictures compare
to
being one more than one
two
words.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convey
  • emotions
  • capture
  • attention
  • evoke
  • impact
  • context
  • detailed information
  • journalism
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