News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats your opinion about it?

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In recent years, the dissemination of news stories globally had been

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enhanced

with pictures. There is no doubt that some people

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

believes

that pictures are more

affective

producing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect

effective

than words.

This

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essay will discuss both

side

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sides

of the argument and take a stand.

Firstly

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, both

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and

newspaper

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are the major media for passing

information

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from point A to

piont

a geometric element that has position but no extension

point

pint

B with an enhanced good quality

pictures

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picture

. The two media helps the locals to get

information

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at their disposal,

for example

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in the rural area, the ruler

usually have

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usually has

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, where the local can assemble to listen to common program of choice,

also

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the most learned person

person

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people

persons

among them can disseminate the

newspaper

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news to them, by reading and passing the knowledge to them in the local

dialete

the usage or vocabulary that is characteristic of a specific group of people

dialect

Secondly

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, the

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can be

use

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used

dissemate

cause to become widely known

disseminate

information

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faster with clearer picture to

majority

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the majority

of people than

newspaper

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, but on the other hands

newspaper

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can be more compare to the

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new with a specific time duration.

For

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example more

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example, more

content can be given in the

news paper

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

with less picture quality than

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with less time duration but more picture quality.

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Further more

in addition

Furthermore

newspaper

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easy

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easily

mobile compare to the

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news. In conclusion, both

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and

newspaper

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are good media for educating the

populess

people in general considered as a whole

populace

about

situation

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the situation

a situation

in a particular place, in my opinion people get more

information

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pictures compare

being one more than one

two

words.

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

233 words

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats your opinion about it?

Fully explain your ideas

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