The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and in the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summerise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The graph shows the percentage of income spent by drivers on petrol, depending on their social and economical condition, both in the United Kingdom and in the United States of America. In the UK, it's possible observing a sharp surge of the proportion of money earned by poor people on fuel, from few percentage points of income to just under 3%. In comparison to rich, the trend is different: despite they spend more money than the poor, in the first range the course is levelled off,
while
in the second
one, it drops markedly. The situation remains stable approximately of the middle-class, where even though an initial increase from 3% to almost 3.5%, secondly
the rise is slight, thus
it reaches 4% of the gain. Instead
of, in the USA, we can see a different progress: firstly
the line grows up and peaks in the range of the poor people and after
this
, there is a plummet of percentage of earnings spent on petrol between just over 5% initially
to nearly 2.5% of the richest people.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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