Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer possible solutions to it.

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Education
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standard declined with the passage of time. Previously, we
were having
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had
only
one
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system
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of
education
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in a country.
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, now we are offering more than
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system
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in the country. Parents were more concern and want their children to get professional
education
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. In early ages, especially mother gave proper time to their children. There
were
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was
no concept of
tution
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
culture. Now, students totally dependent on tutor and whatever
tutor teach
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tutor, teach
parents thinks it will be good for our children. Competition
also
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increased, parents were happy with the good grades of their children
before but
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before, but
now every parent
want
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wants
their child to get 100%. Teachers were
also
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very honest with their profession
before but
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before, but
now it's only business for schools. People chose
this
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profession to make money only. Different systems of
education
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is
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are
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one
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of the
reason
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reasons
of
declined
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decline
declines
of standard of
education
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. Parents should take responsibility of their children. They must supervise their
youngers especially
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younger, especially
younger especially
. Parents should accept the ability of their children and encourage them to get good
marks but
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marks, but
don't force them to study more than their strength. Government should take an action of
different
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different systems
a different system
system
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of educations. They should allow only
one
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system
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so, all children will get the same standard of
education
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. By
this
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way teachers will
also
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more focus on the allowed
system
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. I
am totally agree
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totally agree
with
this
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that
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education standard
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the education standard
declined. Parents, Teachers,
Schools and
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Schools, and
Government all are responsible for
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. All actions should be taken with the earliest convenience. So, if we work
togather
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
, we will improve our
system
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of
education
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Numeracy
  • Literacy
  • Standardized testing
  • Economic disparities
  • Inequality
  • Underprivileged communities
  • Immediate gratification
  • Foundational subjects
  • Professional development
  • Holistic approach
  • Comprehensive reforms
  • Socio-economic background
  • Engaged
  • Traditional methods
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