Nowadays the increasing amount of garbage is a real concern . Why is this happening? What can be done to resolve this?

These days growing amounts of
waste
is an urgent problem.
Although
there are many factors that lead to
this
, there are some solutions. The main part of garbage produced by humanity
are
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is
household wastes. Household
waste
is disposable materials generated by people in daily life, which includes food scarps, paper, bottles, e.t.c. A study conducted by British scientists revealed that the average volume of producing domestic
waste
in 1997 was equal to 450 kilograms per capita a year, whereas in 2017
this
indicator was equal to 650 kg. The negative trend keeps pacing and of the main reasons for that are daily usage product producers. From year to year manufactures have been looking for methods of sales growth, which is quite difficult in modern circumstances because of the high competitiveness level
on
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of
market
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the market
. That’s why companies with the understanding that price and quality of the biggest part of products are equal decided to attract customers with fancy packages. Everything is now packed in several layers.
For instance
, I recently bought a phone. It was in a box, which was wrapped by a tape. The phone, power adapter, charging cable, headphones, usage guide was
also
wrapped. Just imagine how much
waste
is produced because of only one phone. It is important that actions
is taken
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are taken
to combat these problems.
First
of all, governments should ensure that adequate legislation and controls are in place that will stop companies use so much
materials
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material
when packing their products. Ordinary folks
also
have a part to play. There are many ways common people can help to solve the problem, including eliminating single use plastic bottles and dishes, donating clothes and recycle and sort garbage. Companies must
also
try to become more eco-friendly and as a possible solution uses recyclable packages, or offer discounts to customer that choose products without/ with less package. To sum up, rapidly rising
waste
amount is a real problem that has to be solved as soon as possible.
However
, with the serious approach by individuals, governments and business
,
Accept space
,
the situation can be changed.
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