You and some friends ate meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for the celebration Say what was good about the food and the service

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

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letter to express my satisfaction that I got really pleased with your service on

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weekend. Let me explain what happened.

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weekend it was my best friend's birthday and I had already planned how to celebrate

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special event. Me and my other friends

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give him a big surprise on his birthday. My friend was going through a rough time because he was experiencing a lot of problems, so we wanted to cheer him up in these days. At

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I was so worried

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because I was not sure

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make a good party,

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however

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it was more than I expected. When we came there we

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very well by the waitress and they were so friendly to us. The food that we ordered was so delicious too and we danced in the dancing area. We had a great party and my friend was so happy. Thank you so much for all of that

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and my friends are going to be your regular customers!

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Task Achievement

Ensure all parts of the prompt are addressed directly: detail your visit, explain the reason for the celebration, and specify what was good about the food and service. Integrating specific examples or anecdotes can enrich your response and more directly address the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

Use a variety of transition words and phrases to improve the flow of your letter. This enhances the readability and guides your reader through your story more smoothly.

Coherence & Cohesion

Consider including a concluding paragraph to formally close your letter. This could summarize your appreciation and reinforce the positive experience.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

176 words

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