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Some people think studying in groups is better, while some think self study is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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How we are learning is an individual approach. Many supports self learning, while others will rather learn in groups. I will describe both sides and I will explain my vision. On the one hand, self-study can boost students confidence and time management.
In particular
,
this
 type of learning give students flexibility and control over their learning.
Furthermore
, on
this
 way they will have more enthusiasm to pick-up more knowledge and see themselves as successful independent persona who is capable to get thinks alone.
This
 should be a great motivation aspect for the future life and growth.
On the other hand
, learning in the groups representing cooperation. Mostly
this
 happened when students start to question oven future and ability to progress in the academic future. They were
adviced
having the benefit of careful prior consideration or counsel
advised
 to create groups of peers who all get together to work on exams,
esssays
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essays
, projects and homeworks. The peers have different learning
styls
how something is done or how it happens
styles
stylish
 and can help
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 to better comprehend material and vice versa.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
, team studding can be either
intensly
in an intense manner
intensely
 quite or
extremly
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
 loud and rarely
somethin
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
 else. In general
eachother
Suggestion
each other
aremotivators
Suggestion
are motivators
 and supporters same as
advicers
an expert who gives advice
advisers
advisors
adviser
 in
situation
Suggestion
situations
the situation
a situation
 when someone
break
Suggestion
breaks
 out and need help. As
conclusion
Suggestion
a conclusion
, self-study has
merite
be worthy or deserving
merit
merited
 to
bild
make by combining materials and parts
build
indelendec
 while group learning have benefits towards
colaborations
act of working jointly
collaborations
collaboration
celebrations
 among
menbers
one of the persons who compose a social group (especially individuals who have joined and participate in a group organization)
members
 but not implies the dependence. While
everyonecan
Suggestion
everyone can
 be self-learners, the study in groups
need
Suggestion
needs
 more
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 two people in
orther
(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed
order
 to have sharing.
Hence
, teamwork is an
essencial
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
 skill for the
colledge
the body of faculty and students of a college
college
 life.

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