More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages?

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Following the trend of increasing human beings subscribing to the
habit
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of going for
food
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processed by commercial services as against the
personally
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personal
home cooked
food
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, it has been revealed that there are merits and demerits to
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growing
habit
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. In
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light, I believe the merits
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as reduction in
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's stress and increase in job opportunities that come with
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surpass any drawbacks that may be associated with it. Admittedly, the major setback to
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present pattern is breaking up of marriage. As more families grow with
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of buying
food
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from restaurants,
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leaves female children from the home with
lack
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a lack
of proper home training when it comes to cooking
food
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.
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, when
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children grow up and get married, they lack the requisite skills needed to cook
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for the family as needed.
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,
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upsurging
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trend may
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lead to higher
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issues.
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is because
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foods, prepare
from all these commercial services are heavily seasoned with condiments in order to increase the aroma and entice the people. Whereas, all these seasonings have no
health
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benefit, rather it causes more issues by complicating
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challenge.
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, someone suffering from ulcer and he has been medically warned not to eat
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with pepper, going for fast
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will drastically complicate his
health
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.
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, the prime benefit of
incurcating
teach and impress by frequent repetitions or admonitions
inculcating
the
habit
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of going for fast
food
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is
reduction
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a reduction
the reduction
in
life
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's stress. Introduction of commercially processed
food
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came at the right time when other activities and
life
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challenges are already mounting pressure on humans for delivery.
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by implication means the stress of thinking and calculating on what to eat, buying the
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items and
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spend hours in the kitchen has been taken off of
man's shoulder
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the man's shoulder
.
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time can easily be diverted for use in other cogent aspect of
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. Another point to consider is that, evolving of these restaurants either local or standard greatly help in increasing job opportunity for citizens. The importance of availability of jobs cannot be over emphasised. Example of
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includes, increase in economy, reduction in crime rate, higher security, and best of them all is fulfilment in
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life
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the life
of the particular individual employed. To conclude, even though there are disadvantages to
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higher number of citizens moving in the way of already processed
food
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which include dissolution of marriage and increasing
health
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issues, the advantages as discussed widely surpass
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.
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