You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend, asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need saying why you need them making arrangements to meet Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’
Dear Preet
I am glad to hear that you are coming
Brampton
city in the coming month Change preposition
to Brampton
December
and we will meet each other after 5 years. But Change preposition
of December
i
need your favour to buy some traditional Change the capitalization
I
attires
for me when you will come.
Actually, I came Fix the agreement mistake
attire
in
Canada Change preposition
to
since
2020 but Change preposition
in
i
was slim Change the capitalization
I
that
time, Change preposition
at that
while
Linking Words
i
have gained some weight and I am not Change the capitalization
I
looking
good in Wrong verb form
look
the
old Change the word
my
attires
. When you Fix the agreement mistake
attire
will
come, please buy some cultural Verb problem
apply
attires
from our back home and I know, you have very good taste in shopping and choose Fix the agreement mistake
attire
Add an article
a colour
the colour
colour
for outfits Fix the agreement mistake
colours
as well as
Linking Words
i
will send you Change the capitalization
I
measurement
so, you can stitch the Fix the agreement mistake
measurements
outfit
Fix the agreement mistake
outfits
Linking Words
according to
that way.
Change preposition
in
In addition
, I am doing work in Linking Words
the
wedding Correct article usage
a
planner
company and in the summer, Replace the word
planning
i
will attend so many marriage Change the capitalization
I
function
and our Change to a plural noun
functions
indian
tradition is very popular Change the capitalization
Indian
in
the Change preposition
around
Linking Words
while
world. Correct your spelling
whole
This
is the main reason, to buy traditional attire Linking Words
for
Change preposition
apply
me
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, Linking Words
i
will share my Change the capitalization
I
canada
contact number so, when you Change the capitalization
Canada
will arrived
at the airport Wrong verb form
arrive
then
Linking Words
i
will Change the capitalization
I
pickup
you and we will go directly for dinner. If you have any Correct your spelling
pick up
question
, you can text me on my contact number.
I am looking forward to seeing you!
Warm Regards
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure consistency in verb tenses to maintain better coherence.
Coherence & Cohesion
Consider breaking down long sentences into shorter ones for improved readability.
Task Achievement
The letter successfully addresses all required points, making it a complete response.
Task Achievement
A friendly and warm tone is maintained throughout, suitable for a letter to a friend.
Coherence & Cohesion
Logical structure is maintained with clear paragraphs focusing on specific ideas.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite