You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend, asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need saying why you need them making arrangements to meet Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’

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Dear Preet I am glad to hear that you are coming
Brampton
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to Brampton
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city in the coming month
December
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of December
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and we will meet each other after 5 years. But
i
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need your favour to buy some traditional
attires
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for me when you will come. Actually, I came
in
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to
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Canada
since
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in
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2020 but
i
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I
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was slim
that
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at that
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time,
while
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i
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I
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have gained some weight and I am not
looking
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good in
the
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my
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old
attires
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attire
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. When you
will
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come, please buy some cultural
attires
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attire
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from our back home and I know, you have very good taste in shopping and choose
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a colour
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colour
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for outfits
as well as
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i
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will send you
measurement
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measurements
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so, you can stitch the
outfit
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according to
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in
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that way.
In addition
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, I am doing work in
the
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wedding
planner
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company and in the summer,
i
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will attend so many marriage
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and our
indian
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tradition is very popular
in
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the
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while
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whole
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world.
This
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is the main reason, to buy traditional attire
for
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me
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.
Moreover
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,
i
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will share my
canada
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Canada
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contact number so, when you
will arrived
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at the airport
then
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i
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I
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will
pickup
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pick up
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you and we will go directly for dinner. If you have any
question
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, you can text me on my contact number. I am looking forward to seeing you! Warm Regards Hb

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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure consistency in verb tenses to maintain better coherence.
Coherence & Cohesion
Consider breaking down long sentences into shorter ones for improved readability.
Task Achievement
The letter successfully addresses all required points, making it a complete response.
Task Achievement
A friendly and warm tone is maintained throughout, suitable for a letter to a friend.
Coherence & Cohesion
Logical structure is maintained with clear paragraphs focusing on specific ideas.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Excitement
  • Upcoming
  • Specific items
  • Traditional
  • Significantly
  • Convenient
  • Transportation
  • Gratitude
  • Willingness
  • Anticipation
  • Personalize
  • Update
  • Polite request
  • Flight schedule
  • Availability
  • Smooth arrival
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