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Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. Do you agree?

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Nowadays, the people are migrating to other countries for their better education, career and lifestyle. I truly agreed
to
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with
this
 statement that, when different nationalities
lived together it
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lived together, it
 will
became
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become
 a great success for the growth of the
country
.
To begin
this
, by a mixed culture of people will give new ideas for the innovation.
For instance
, in my home
country
 there is a leading Chinese restaurant going successfully. On their initial step, the natives told about that it will be a failure. But a different cuisine makes a
variety flavour
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variety, flavour
 to the ordinary dishes. Like that, different ideas from other nationalities will be a good achievement in all fields.
Furthermore
, it helps to learn so many languages and
also
 different culture.
Thus
 we can enjoy and celebrate the cultural festival.
Moreover
, researchers told that the Asian
are
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is
 good in mathematics, the African are good in their strength, the Europe and America utilize these abilities and become
global leader
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global leaders
a global leader
the global leader
. So, by using these abilities the
country
 can develop faster.
Therefore
, the countries like America, Australia, Canada and other European countries become stable.
Also
, it helps to develop the science and technology. Like it
also
 gives progress in different types of skilled
works including
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works, including
 engineering department, software development, accounts and finance etc.
Thus
, from homogeneous society to multi
culture nationalities
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culture, nationalities
 can improve their teamwork, problem solving, planning, organizing etc. In conclusion, different nationalities and cultural background living together in the same
country
 makes the
country
 develop faster and it leads to a great success.
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