You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he should get a job. write a letter to this friend in you later say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him or her.
Hi Steve,
Good to see a letter from you and thanks for choosing me to query about choosing your platform. I am glad to suggest you and I thought a lot about it to reply
you
back with the decision which will decide your life.
Change preposition
to you
First
of all, I would say no to Linking Words
college
. Because, when I was in the same situation Use synonyms
like
you, I dreamed of getting a nice degree from the Change preposition
as
college
and later I assume can move to places for Use synonyms
Use synonyms
job
where ever I wanted to. It never happened to me as well as other students who studied in the same class Add an article
a job
with
me. Change preposition
as
College
study runs Use synonyms
very
commercialized way which teaches less in terms of productivity and Correct article usage
a very
care
a lot about grades which is not useful if one has Change the verb form
cares
lack
of knowledge in their respective stream. Finding a nice Correct article usage
a lack
job
later might be tough because many companies now offer positions based on their age and not as per applicants grades.
In case if you start working now by choosing a Use synonyms
job
you are interested in, you will save the Use synonyms
college
time as well as it gives you Use synonyms
real time
experience Add a hyphen
real-time
additionally
it teaches you the life quickly. It may Linking Words
also
save a lot of money Linking Words
to
your parents which they can use for a different activity. I would like Change preposition
for
give
you another suggestion in terms of Fix the infinitive
to give
job
search, I prefer you should look into jobs related to Use synonyms
marketing
industry cause I know you were very good at advertising the product and pushing someone to buy. Correct article usage
the marketing
Sales
industry gives Correct article usage
The sales
first
priority to people who have Linking Words
such
skill sets Linking Words
like
you. I hope you like the way I have explained and follow it. Don't hesitate to write me back if you need any other help.
Thanks,
John.Change preposition
as
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,