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In many modern societies , grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandchildren. What do you think are the consequences of this ?

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It is irrefutable that
,
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,
 in
this
 contemporary era every person is running behind money. Grandchildren do not spend
time
 with their grandparents in
this
 community. There are
few results
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a few results
 of
this
,
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,
 which I would elaborate in upcoming paragraphs with the proper example. To commence with
,
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,
 there are an abundant of drawbacks if children do not spend
time
 with their grandparents.
Firstly
,
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,
 in
this
 current period of
time mostly
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time, mostly
 teenager
spend
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spends
 their most of
time
 for the study and
then
 they initial to play online games in
this
 way they spend their whole day for the activities
.
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.
For instance
,
Times
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the Times
 of India observed in a survey that more than 80% of adults who do not know anything about their culture and tradition because they do not spend
time
 with their
assistors
someone from whom you are descended (but usually more remote than a grandparent)
ancestors
sisters
assistance
.
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.
In addition
 to
this
, whilst grown ups do not spend some
time
 with their grandparents, it is not merely harmful for the grandchildren but
also
 for grandparents because grandparents would feel alone after that they might be
suffers
Suggestion
suffering
 from the disease like, insomnia and their mind would
also
 be remain in the stress
therefore
 their grandparents should spend some
time
 with them.
Thus these
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Thus, these
 are the consequences which can occur from
this
.
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 To recapitulate, it is
manifested
Suggestion
manifest
 from the above mentioned essay that children do not spend
time
 with their grandparents for their
advance life
Suggestion
advance in life
.
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 Parents and teachers should learn their children to spend
time
 with their grandparents, it would be fruitful for both children and grandparents.

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