You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter : 1) Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college. 2) Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her. 3) Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.
Dear Chan,
I am glad to hear from you after
such
a long time. though I do not know if I am the right person to suggest, but
as a response to your letter I would definitely Remove the conjunction
apply
advice
you to look for Replace the word
advise
job
, Add an article
a job
instead
of joining college. I totally believe that Correct your spelling
full-time
fulltime
employment will give you far more pleasure than theoretical study considering the fact that being in actual film production is all you have dreamed for your whole life.
Not only for self-satisfactionCorrect your spelling
full-time
,
but getting a post even in Remove the comma
apply
entry level
position in Add a hyphen
entry-level
media
industry counts more than Correct article usage
the media
academic
degree. it will offer Add an article
an academic
networking
option which will ultimately open new doors for you. Not to forget, you will gather tons of technical skills while sharping your artistic vision from Correct article usage
a networking
the
fellow filmmakers and crews! so, starting Correct article usage
apply
career
immediately is Add an article
a career
the
wise decision to take.
Making the Correct article usage
a
first
footstep in the
showbiz is the hardest part. so I will force you to look for vacancies in Correct article usage
apply
runner
or assistant director section. though both of these have the most Correct article usage
the runner
Correct your spelling
workload
work load
and challenging schedule, Correct your spelling
workload
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
it
will push you close to your dream job. What's more, you can apply for "extra" roles as it can help you to work in big studio films. if you have expertise Correct pronoun usage
they
on
video editing, Change preposition
in
then
give me a buzz! I have a friend who owns the leading post-production company of
the city and I will be thrilled to put you up in touch with him.
I can't wait to hear which path you choose to go. so write Change preposition
in
me
as soon as you take the Change preposition
to me
next
step!
Best,
ShahlaSubmitted by feroz121 on
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,