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In films and computer games violence has become more popular. Some people think this has negative effects on society, other think it is harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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, there is no doubt that the popularity of violent movies and games are emerging
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 it is important to take consideration of any adverse impact on
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. Some people believe it is non-dangerous leisure activity, I support the view that visual
violence
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 from any media affects the mind of any
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 which is harmful for
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. Those who advocate no harm from visual
violence
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 may argue that they are having
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 restriction and parents should keep an eye one their children.
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, in India, movies or games which contain a lot of
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 have
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 restriction of 18 so the person who is watching have mature minds which is hardly having bad effects.
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, parents play a significant role
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 the offspring’s brought up, so the onus is on the parent, for not to get any addictions or not to get any games or movies to see which are
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 restricted.
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, I would argue that
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 from any media can be harmful to the
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 and any
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 of person could have a bad influence to make them commit a crime. The latter view, which many security specialist would accept, became true for those crimes who are based on movies or games and does not relate to any
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, as per few police records, the murderer got motives from visual criminal serials
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, juvenile crime is increasing mostly in those countries where ammunitions have no strict rules. Due to
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 video games and its addiction,
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the child’s mind
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negative
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 influenced, that they commit
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 heinous crime as mass shootouts. In
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the United States
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a few months
 back a teenage kid killed many teachers and students out of revenge. In conclusion, while
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an
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 restriction on visual content and parent’s observation is mandatory and vital, In my view, less strict rules for violent games and movies could have a bad influence on any aged person and it’s addiction can lead to mass destruction on
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • desensitize
  • aggressive behavior
  • glorify
  • artistic expression
  • pent-up emotions
  • media consumption
  • model for conflict resolution
  • fiction vs. reality
  • outlet for frustration
  • conclusive evidence
  • social influences
  • real-world aggression
  • interaction
  • imitation
  • controlled environment
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