In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

Some countries allow young people to do a paid job in order to gain experience.

This

trend is not taken positively by most people, whereas others advocate children working as it enables the skill set. In my opinion, I firmly believe that adolescent age is for learning formal education rather than focusing on gaining experience.

This

essay will discuss both views and support my stand.

To begin

with, in developed countries most of the teenagers do a summer job during their school break,

this

is not because they need money,

however

, their purpose is

learing

the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge

learning

. These jobs would not have any pressure and are performed as a fun learning activity,

for example

, working at

mcdonalds

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McDonalds

or being a coast guard. While

on the other hand

, children are forced to work because of their financial condition in

under developed

relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply

underdeveloped

countries. In

this

situation young people are often abused to the extreme level and mostly they become

pyschologically

with regard to psychology

psychologically

disturbed.

As a result

, these kids bring more disturbance in others life,

such

as gun shooting at school or killing people. Children who obtain a formal education

often turns

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often turn

out to be more normal and wise citizens. No matter which place they belong too, after completing

studies they

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studies, they

can add value and change the country's economical future. There are many organisations globally who would hire a candidate with good educational credential than

a

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an

experienced person without a degree.

Moreover learning

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Moreover, learning

can help them to be a civilised human and they would respect gender equality and behaviours which we lack in todays time as our previous generation solely focused on being employed and not being qualified. In conclusion, Some places

entertain

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to entertain

child working, whereas some people are

complety

to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent

completely

complete

against it.

Eventhough

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Even though

young people are gaining

experiences

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experience

and earning money, still they are

too

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rookies

to be employed where they are

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exploited

by adults.

Therefore

, children should not get engaged

to

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in

paid work and focus on their education.