The number of older people is increasing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
The ageing
population
is a problem that many countries are facing nowadays. Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
essay will discuss both pros and cons of increasing number of elderly people. Suggestion
This
However
Linking Words
,
in my opinion, having a large Accept space
,
population
of older people has more disadvantages than advantages.
Use synonyms
in
one hand, there is no doubt that the seniors can contribute to the society in some ways. They, undoubtedly, have more Suggestion
On
In
knowledge
over the years in Use synonyms
comparision
to their younger ones. They are the act of examining resemblances
comparison
maturet
persons to get advice from as they have already fully ripe; at the height of bloom
matured
mature
gor
experience of every situation in their lives. They come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
got
also
have deep Linking Words
knowledge
on different life or career experiences. Use synonyms
Thus
, the younger generation can easily engrave their Linking Words
knowledge
from the older people. Use synonyms
Linking Words
for
instance, recent Suggestion
For
resserach
concluded that older people are the one who had a great role in the systematic investigation to establish facts
research
postive
attitude characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
developement
in young people. act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
Thus
the older people help youngsters to give valuable Linking Words
knowledge
which is crucial Use synonyms
for
their lives.
Suggestion
to
However
, there are more disadvantages than advantages to having a large Linking Words
population
of seniors. Use synonyms
Linking Words
firstly
, Older people are the most unproductive in the workforce of a nation. Most of them are dependent and physically and mentally Suggestion
Firstly
weak so
they have Accept comma addition
weak, so
todepend
on their children. Suggestion
to depend
Besides
, at a certain age, they are more susceptible to developing numerous diseases and illnesses. Linking Words
Therefore
, medical care are Linking Words
required which
is more expensive. Accept comma addition
required, which
Furthermore
, nursing homes are not cheap either and caring for elderly sick people is never Linking Words
a
easy work. Suggestion
an
In other words
, Linking Words
theysuffer
from a financial burden on their children. Suggestion
they suffer
Thus
, they are becoming Linking Words
burden
for the society and their family member as well.
To sum up, the drawbacks of having a large ageing Suggestion
a burden
population
definitely outweigh the benefits. Economically, the ageing Use synonyms
population
does not add much value to the society as they are not capable to work mentally as well as physically weak advance and Use synonyms
its
cost more the thing named or in question
it
budnet
to improve a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose
budget
thir
life style of them or themselves
their
such
as health Linking Words
faciliries
,a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?