Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
This
essay will discuss the positive impact of Linking Words
sport
Use synonyms
amentities
on public health as we as other factor which need to improve for the healthy and things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
prospeerous
in fortunate circumstances financially; moderately rich
prosperous
life
of Use synonyms
human being
.
To commence with, Suggestion
a human being
sport
facilities play a pivotal role to Use synonyms
provides
a healthy Suggestion
provide
life
to humankind. Use synonyms
futhermore
, in addition
Furthermore
furthermore
this
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types
of Suggestion
type
amenties
things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
ailments
make
the people fresh and aid to get rid Suggestion
makes
from
Suggestion
of
stressful
Suggestion
a stressful life
life
. Use synonyms
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for
example, a recent research concluded that a person who Suggestion
For
inolved
in playing sports connected by participation or association or use
involved
such
as football, volleyball and so on are Linking Words
more healthier
than those who Suggestion
healthier
more healthy
dont
do any kind of do not
don't
acitivies
. advocating or engaged in activism
activist
Hence
, there is no doubt that Linking Words
its
makes humankind physically as well as mentally fit and fine. the thing named or in question
it
Secondly
, if the people are motivated to Linking Words
indulged
in Suggestion
indulge
Use synonyms
sport
they can active their mind and get refreshment by playing different types of games and Suggestion
a sport
also
became socialize to each other. Linking Words
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moreover
, the public in addition
Moreover
become
more active and can get rid Suggestion
becomes
from
lazy Suggestion
of
life
with unhealthy Use synonyms
life
.
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Linking Words
however
, in my Suggestion
However
opinion not
only Accept comma addition
opinion, not
sport
facilities crucial for healthy Use synonyms
Use synonyms
life but
Accept comma addition
life, but
also
the healthy Linking Words
food
is Use synonyms
neccessary
for public wellness. absolutely essential
necessary
Firstly
, Linking Words
package
Use synonyms
food
use is increasing day by day due to the laziness and Use synonyms
careless of people
. Suggestion
careless people
its
Suggestion
It's
It
Its
doesnt
mean does not
doesn't
package
Use synonyms
food
kill Use synonyms
you but
if you take in regular Accept comma addition
you, but
manner
Accept comma addition
manner, then
then
there is no doubt, Linking Words
its
will kill you one day. the thing named or in question
it
in
these days, rather than making Suggestion
In
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home made
made or produced in the home or by yourself
homemade
food
people prefer to take Use synonyms
package
Use synonyms
food
items more than Use synonyms
home
made. Use synonyms
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hence
, they suffer from (used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
Hence
disease
which makes their Suggestion
a disease
life
devoid of being healthy. Use synonyms
For instance
, a recent research concluded that Linking Words
approximatley
90% people love to have (of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
approximately
package
Use synonyms
food
more than Use synonyms
home
made so they are suffering from disease like obesity, high blood pressure and so on. Use synonyms
Hence
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
home made
made or produced in the home or by yourself
homemade
food
should be given more priority than packaged Use synonyms
food
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
sport
facilities Use synonyms
should be improve
for making mankind healthy. Suggestion
should improve
should be improved
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however
, not only Suggestion
However
Use synonyms
sport
nut Suggestion
sports
also
other things like Linking Words
home
made Use synonyms
food
should be improve for Use synonyms
imrovog
getting higher or more vigorous
improving
overall deveopment
of people. Suggestion
the overall development
overall development
Hence
, Linking Words
government
should give Suggestion
the government
important
to Suggestion
importance
sport
as well as other things like Use synonyms
food
for holistic development of people.Use synonyms
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