A traditional library is a place that shelves book for readers to borrow or read. However, technological advancement and its impacts on the way we learn new things and share information redefined the concept of library. Thus digital contents and technological facilities have wildly been used all over the world

A
library
is a place that shelves books for readers to read or borrow books.
However
, technological advancement and its tremendous effects on the way we learn new things and share information.
Thus digital
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Thus, digital
contents and high
technological
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technology
facilities have been widely used all over the world. I
am wholeheartedly agree
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wholeheartedly agree
am wholeheartedly agreeing
have wholeheartedly agreed
that Traditionally, people's
first
impression about
library
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the library
libraries
a library
is that it is a
books
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book
container where only shelves paper books. Perhaps the
first
and foremost reason why individuals do not like multimedia at
library
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the library
is that they distract readers' attention.To cite an example, if somebody
is watch
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is watching
a video
next
to us, we would be attracted by sounds and images.Another compelling reason is that,
initially
, buying media facilities are expensive, and librarians have to buy computer accessories, desk and
also
pay the internet fee. Some people,
however
, myself included, advocate that media can abstract more readers and save money and space. As we know,
media
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the media
offer a dynamic combination of images, sounds and virtual tours. I am positive that listening to reputed speech or taking a virtual tour is far more interactive and exciting than only reading books.
In addition
, it takes great efforts to prevent books from moisture, fire and human damages, while electrical books are
easily
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easy
to be copied and stored. With the help of software, a few librarians are able to in charge of
a
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an
entire
library
, which would reduce maintenance fees.
Last
but not least, digital contents save physical space. Consider a single DVD as an example, it can store hundreds of dictionaries which
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
an entire shelf.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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