You have just read an article in a national newspapaer which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. •Write a letter to the editor of the newspapaer. In your letter •Say which points in the article you agree with •Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres •Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of article. Write at least 150 words
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to show my disagreement regarding an article published
last
Sunday which claimed every downtown of our nation seems identical.
My name is Jacob, and I am a continuous reader of your The Nation Era newspaper with registration number P5623. Although
the article mentioned three factors elucidation of city centres, I agree with the first two points. Where the first point was related to facilities like Dominos and other outlets, the second one was the availability of public transport vehicles. Both these amenities are most likely similar at
all places.
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in
however
, believe the third point which presented the housing arrangements was my concern for disagreement. It is because the central town of my area has a unique look, it contains old traditionally built buildings surrounded with modern infrastructure which is not present in any other area like this
. In addition
, every shop has hanging plants on their front and this
provides a distinct look to it.
Further
, I would like to invite the writer of this
article Mr John for a tour of our central town under my guidance if he disapproves of my view. Certainly, a small trip can make him change his views.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jacob Brown.Submitted by Mrjit147 on
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Consider providing more specific examples of how your town center differs, such as unique architecture or cultural landmarks, to strengthen your argument.
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Ensure consistent use of formal tone, like replacing informal phrases such as "I agree with the first two points" with more formal equivalents.
coherence cohesion
Organize ideas with clear paragraph separation to enhance readability.
task achievement
The letter successfully addresses all parts of the prompt, including agreement, explanation, and an invitation.
coherence cohesion
The use of formal greeting and closing is appropriate for a letter to the editor.