In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future. To what extent do you agree with this view

With our surplus dependence on the internet and email communication, there is no denying to the fact that the Information Technology (IT) has bloomed

offlate

a subordinate or subsidiary associate; a person who is affiliated with another or with an organization

affiliate

affiliates

to become

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become

one of the biggest sectors in today's world.

Nonetheless

, it is advocated by many that, in the times to come, it is

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

darker side that will be

overweighing

so strong as to be irresistible

overwhelming

all the goods it has offered.

Likewise

, In my opinion, I completely agree

to

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with

this

notion.

Firstly

, the main motto of IT, to increase productivity and efficiency of our lives, has been lost by far as more and more people are

indulged

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indulging

only in killing

thier

of them or themselves

their

precious time rather than utilising for constructive purposes.

For instance

, most of the university students, having uncontrolled access to the internet, end up wasting time after being diverted to unwanted

websites

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web sites

.

This

decreases their

productivity which

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productivity, which

would not be the case with traditional tools

such

as books or journals from the library.

Furthermore

, social media, which was meant to break the barriers between different communities or nationalities has miserably failed to do so.

Prime example

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A prime example

of

this

is the incident of

sucidal

the act of killing yourself

suicide

bombing which occurred

last

year in New Zealand, lead to killing dozens of innocents. The event was planned to be an attention seeking mission utilising the mass appeal of social media portals. To conclude,

although

, the developments in IT have revolutionised our lives in terms easier access to information and provision of space age communication,

this

has come with its

detremental

(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury

detrimental

effects which are soaring day by day at astronomical rates.