Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of valuable money. What is your opinion?

Since the beginning of the 21st century, a lot of animals are exposed to the

extinction

. Some people believe that more

money

shoud

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

be spent to protect the endangered

species

from the

extinction

, while others argue that there are

others

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

issues more important than these animals, and the

money

should be spent on them,

such

as helping people who are suffering from wars.

This

essay will discuss the reason why

money

should be spent on these endangered

species regardless

Accept comma addition

species, regardless

the importance of other issues.

Money

should be spent on the endangered

species

because these animals are very important to balance the

ecosystem

. The damage of the

ecosystem

will affect significantly on

humans

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human

lives in the future. Recent research, which was conducted

in

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at

the Washington University, has shown that killing the endangered

species

will cause the disappearing of

humans

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human

lives in the near future, and it recommends to fund the projects which are responsible

on

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for

protecting these

species

.

Therefore

, it seems clear that

money

should be spent on protecting endangered

species

to maintain the balance in the

ecosystem

.

On the other hand

, some people think that

money

should be spent on other issues,

such

helping people who are suffering from wars. Some people do not have anything to eat, and these people have the priority than the endangered

species

.

For example

, more than one million people die every year because of wars. But, these people are unaware of the fact that the

extinction

of endangered

species

could affect our world

also

, and it is impact is greater than wars.

Thus

,

mony

the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender

money

should be spent to help endangered

species

from

extinction

regardless the impacts of wars. In conclusion,

this

essay discussed the reason why

money

should be paid to the organizations who follow endangered

species

since it is important to

balace

a state of equilibrium

balance

place

the

ecosystem

. In my opinion, I believe that the endangered animals should be protected from the

extinction

.