You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, 1. describe the situation 2. explain why you cannot continue at this time 3. say what action you would like to take

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Dear Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I will be postponing the course in Econometrics that I am running at the moment. I am currently running a

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course at Mandalez University because I am working and cannot afford to quit my job to focus fully on my academics due to financial

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. Of recent, my schedule at

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has been increased due to a high turnover of staff at the office which has increased my workload. I cannot continue to combine

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and schooling at

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because I am taking on more responsibilities at

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which is

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time consuming

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and I find it difficult to spare adequate

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needed for classes and extra study. I would like to take a break

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my study for the

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one month to focus on my job. I believe the situation at

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will improve after

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period as more

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would be recruited in coming weeks. I will

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keep in touch with my classmates so I can get updates on class activities and assignments. I look forward to hearing

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positive feedback. Yours faithfully, Oluyomi Akinnigbagbe

Fri Nov 22 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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192 words

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