You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, 1. describe the situation 2. explain why you cannot continue at this time 3. say what action you would like to take

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Dear Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I will be postponing the course in Econometrics that I am running at the moment. I am currently running a

part

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time

course at Mandalez University because I am working and cannot afford to quit my job to focus fully on my academics due to financial

constraint

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. Of recent, my schedule at

work

has been increased due to a high turnover of staff at the office which has increased my workload. I cannot continue to combine

work

and schooling at

this

time

because I am taking on more responsibilities at

work

which is

time consuming

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and I find it difficult to spare adequate

time

needed for classes and extra study. I would like to take a break

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my study for the

one month to focus on my job. I believe the situation at

work

will improve after

this

period as more

staffs

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would be recruited in coming weeks. I will

also

keep in touch with my classmates so I can get updates on class activities and assignments. I look forward to hearing

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positive feedback. Yours faithfully, Oluyomi Akinnigbagbe

Fri Nov 22 2019

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