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More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages.

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people prefer fast foods rather than home-made foods. In my opinion, the demerits of having a readily prepared food
such
 as questionable hygienic preparation and its long term effect on the health system of an individual outweighs any benefit it may bring. Admittedly, depending solely on ready- made foods can be
time
 saving.
This
 is because fast foods negates the need to spend hours in the process of preparing
home-made
made or produced in the home or by yourself
homemade
 foods.
In other words
, the
time
 conserved can be channeled into other productive activities of the day.
For instance
, the lifestyle of an average resident of Lagos requires them to leave home early and return late
therefore
 fast foods have been the best bet for their survival. Another positive side of ready-made foods, is the variety it offers. There
is
Suggestion
are
 a wide variety of choices
from
Suggestion
of
 continental dishes to local dishes which can be gotten without stress.
Nevertheless
, a major drawback of ready-made foods is that the hygiene in terms of preparation can be questionable owing to the large volume of meals prepared per
time
. Ultimately, it is difficult to ascertain the hygienic level of foods not self prepared.
Furthermore
, the long term effect of fast foods results to various health challenges
such
 as obesity
.
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.
This
 is due to the fact these
foods mostly
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foods, mostly
 contain high fat contents which leads to the build up of cholesterol in the body.
Moreover
, ready-made foods contain
sweetners
something added to foods to make them taste sweeter
sweeteners
 and various types of additives which can be
deterimental
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
 to the body system. In conclusion, while the major points of depending on readily prepared meals
includes
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include
time
 saving its numerous drawbacks
such
 as
it
it is
it's
 overall effect on the health system cannot be underestimated.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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