More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages?

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It is thought that many people now keen to fast

food

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than homemade.In my opinion

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while there are some benefits of

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its demerits

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as high risk of health challenges and cost of expenses are major factors to consider. Admittedly, there are benefits of fast

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as compared to homemade

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. One of

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is that

it is

it's

safe time and energy. Good

food

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entails details

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period

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the period

required for the preparation of one meal can be used to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

some official

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business work.

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it gives time to relax

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being stressed at work place or any other activities of the day

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getting an already prepared meal to eat when hunger

set

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sets

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speaks well.

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this

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system

have provided

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has provided

thousands of people with

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jobs

a job

.People now invest in

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the fast food industry, which

the fast food industry which

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industry which have increased the economic of communities involved.Recently, a research being done on economic growth in major cities of Nigeria shows that fast

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industries are part of the economic buster.

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, a prime drawback of fast

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is that, there is

high risk

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a high risk

of health challenges through

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.The

unchallant

marked by casual disrespect

insolent

attitude of most fast foods towards personal and environmental

hygiene which

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hygiene, which

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involve how fresh the raw foods and how well prepared it is, are part of the factors causing cholera and other related disease. Some equipment

are being used

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is being used

to make

large quantity

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large quantities

a large quantity

food

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in less seconds which have deprived the body the major nutrient of the

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food rather

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food, rather

it deposit

toxic substance

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a toxic substance

to the body system which have caused

damages

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damage

to the body system of many.Most of these fast

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industries set their priorities on profit making, not minding to sale unhealthy foods to their customers.Recently, a research by a

chinese

a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China

Chinese

doctor shows that

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poison is highly significant in fast foods.

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getting ready-made

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is highly expensive when compared homemade

food

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.People spend huge amount on getting ready-made

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these days which have discouraged most from making life savings. In conclusion

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while part of the plus points of having a fast

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includes

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include

a minimal time and energy,

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

numerous drawbacks among which is health hazards is one

that is

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incomparable to any merit it might have.Health is wealth.

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Your opinion

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