In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Gaining

weight especially

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weight, especially

in young teenagers is a major anxious matter amongst many countries. Children became fat because of the modernization and technology advancement.

This

essay will discuss for the problems of obesity in young people and the responsibilities

for

Suggestion

of

the government, the society and the parents. It is likely that one of the prominent causes giving rises to

this

problem is the major change in our lifestyle due to remarkable advancement in technology, which has considerable impact on our daily life and health. Children could consume many

junk

foods at any time, which we consume every day made the matters worse. These foods, which are easily available, often contain ingredients that are highly in calorie, cholesterol and fat, while lack necessary vitamin, mineral and protein and these factors are taking a toll on our health.

In addition

, teenagers are playing with their computers rather than playing outside.

As a result

, teenagers are lacking in exercises and becoming overweight. In my opinion, teachers, parents and government as a whole should take

this

issue as an emergency and take a necessary step.

For instance

, parents

are keep

Suggestion

are keeping

keep

an eye on their children’s eating

habit

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habits

and make sure to take healthy

food

while reducing the quality of

junk

food

. The government could limit

junk

food

advertising to discourage children to fail for the bad eating habits. In conclusion,

although

many countries are now falling in the similar issues of unhealthy

diet but

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diet, but

we can defeat

this

issue by following the steps

such

as the limit of the

junk

food

consumed by children.