The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do ypu agree or disagree?

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Owing to the increasing trend in the patronage of online shopping some people have suggested that

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will lead to the shutting down of physical shops both in rural and urban areas. In my view, I strongly disagree as factors

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as literacy and diversity in people's personalities will mitigate against

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with, it has been observed that there are many people who still prefers to see what they want to buy before paying for it.

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people will prefer to visit a physical shop

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of purchasing the item online. It should be noted that a recent research by an economist in the department of sales and marketing of Lagos State University has proven that online sales is more prevalent among the elite

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of the level of understanding

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required in the use of various applications used for

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mode of shopping.

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, online shopping will not allow one to check whether the cloth or shoe ordered for is the perfect size,

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the reason some individuals will prefer to go to the market. Other research by a prominent professor in the University of Ibadan has

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proven that diversity in people's personalities and age is

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a major factor that affect the level of online patronage. Statistics have shown that ninety five percent of patronage is found among young people as

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older people are scared of taking the risk

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associated with online mode of shopping.

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, a survey carried out in a rural area of Oyo town showed that elderly people are so afraid of losing their money,

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they will rather prefer to shop physically and see what they are buying before making payment. In conclusion, ~I believe that~ even though there is an immense growth in online shopping, I strongly disagree that it will result in shutting down of physical shops, both in rural and urban areas

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of factors

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as literacy, age and diversity in people's personalities.👌

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do ypu agree or disagree?

Your opinion

More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, so there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree

'It is often argued that children must be protected from unsuitable material on TV and the Internet by government censorship. Others say that this is the parents' responsibility to control what their children do and watch. To what extent do you think that this is true?

In the future, people may no longer be able to pay things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phone. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same numbers of vacations in a year.To what extent do you agree or disagree?