With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet. What problems may this trend lead to? What solutions would you recomend?

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modern era of digital
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, with the founding of many free social media sites like Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram, many adolescents have been given an u
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access
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to the
internet
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. Spending time with their acquaintances from the comfort of their homes has become a norm. Unfortunately,
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access
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without supervision,
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to social media sites comes with some c
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and in some cases have l
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led
to dangerous consequences like death. Fortunately, for every problem which we face, we have a solution. Let us
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explore about the problems related to easy
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access
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/social media sites and the best solutions to deal with these issues. With the arrival of social media sites, young adults convince their parents to get an easy
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to the
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and most of the parents do not have knowledge of the
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which is available on n
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the net
It is a known fact that, the
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connectivity converts
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whole
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into one small village where one can easily have a conversation with the person who is sitting in another corner of the
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. Sometimes, s
pecially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
t
eenagers are
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teenagers, are
prone to get harassed and blackmailed by their own friends, strangers, and imposters on social chat sites. A leading daily n
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newspaper
conducted one study related to the suicidal deaths in teenagers and it was shocking to find that the
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most cause f
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of
the suicidal deaths in teenagers was harassment or blackmailing by friends or strangers/imposters on
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nternet.
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the internet
Youngsters who get exposed to pornography at the very early age will have n
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a negative impact
on their psychology. Government agencies around the
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are making stricter rules against child pornography, as many survey agencies have found that the raise in cases of rapes and murders of young children is directly related to the child pornography which is easily available on net.
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, they say that, every problem has got the solution.
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and foremost, Schools, NGOs, and Government Agencies should work together by running an awareness campaign related to the abuse of social media sites and
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by youngsters and the target population must be young children, teenagers, parents, and teachers.
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the role
of parents and teachers becomes utmost important to tackle
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issue. Parents/teachers should monitor the
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which is surfed by teenage kids,
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can be done by purchasing some softwares which help in blocking of certain sites which got adult
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. To restate, issues like, young adults getting exposed to the inappropriate
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, harassment, bullying, or blackmails arising from the u
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usage of
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the internet
are real and we have got easy solutions to tackle them by blocking adult, inappropriate, and unwanted contents, including social media sites.

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