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The diagram below show how leather goods are producted. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below show how leather goods are producted. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures describe the production process of
the
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leather goods. First of all,
animal's
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the animal's
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 skin has to be dry, because it is plenty of water and
others
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 liquid residues,
as
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 blood.
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, it is delivered to a specific factory, inasmuch the animal layer has to suffer some treatments. In fact, the leather is put in a tank with water and lime and
next
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, in another one with only a solution of lime.
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this
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, it is flattened between two counter-rotating rollers to reduce the thickness.
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, it is soaked again with water and vegetable matter, for tanning,
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, to get its typical brown colour, and
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, polishing. Summing up, the first
working
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 is over, so the skin is ready to be delivered again to another factory for the
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 processing. After the
last
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 part, the industry produces a lot of goods,
such
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 as shoes, basketballs or bags.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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