Some people believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high Level degree. Do you agree or disagree?

There are so many
classification
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classifications
in jobs depending upon the education and experience. Mainly blue collar jobs preferred to manual
workforce
and white collar jobs referred to educated people.
This
essay stated that both of these classification should get equal salary. I totally disagreed
to
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with
this
statement, because there is a wide range of difference between the physical workers and the educated people.
Firstly
, the people who have
high level
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a high level degree
degree
will be paid more than physical
workforce
. Because they studied for so many years to achieve their
degree
and lost their valuable time without spending for their needs.
For instance
, I studied my graduation in
hostel
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a hostel
for four years and I am unable to take part in so many family functions due to my studies.
Secondly
, when the manual
workforce
got equally
paid
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paid, then
then
there will be no importance
for
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of
education. Because the graduated or post graduated people thought that without being educated, got
high salary
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high salaries
a high salary
in
works
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the works
.
Thus
, the literacy rate of the country will decrease.
Furthermore
, the people who have
higher
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higher degrees
a higher degree
degree
in particular
subjects can lead the company and the labour would build the structures.
For example
, in a multinational construction company the project engineer who have
high
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a high degree
high degrees
degree
in their department will be executed the project and the technicians will build the project. In conclusion, I believe that the educated people with high qualification should pay more salary than the manual
workforce
. Because the educated people have more dignity in society due to their effort in completing the course in higher marks.
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