International entertainers, including sports personalities, often get paid millions of dollars in one year. In your view, with widespread poverty in the world, are these huge earnings justified?

Overseas celebrities like footballers, singers and actors are earning so much money in a year. Earnings are attached to v

alues

Suggestion

the values

placed on individuals and a

bility

Suggestion

the ability

to solve a problem. In my opinion, i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that everyone deserves to be rich as long as hard work is involved. TV stars and the other personalities

also

deserve to be rich irrespective of the society standards.

Firstly

, Celebrities are diligent at what they do. There has never been anyone that rises to stardom without hard work. I will s

ight

make reference to

cite

an example of an international and one of the most successful footballer, Chritiano Ronaldo, He said, he trained more than his colleagues and he is one of the most richest and celebrated footballer in the world, he always spent extra hours to exercise and stay fit to make his earnings.

Secondly

, Most of the stars are always setting up or supporting a c

harity

Suggestion

charitable

organization in order to give back to that society so as to eradicate the poverty in the country. The late pop legend, Michael Jackson gave so much to charities and orphanages. Another American singer, Akon spent millions of Dollars in generating power to his African country, Senegal, in order to alleviate poverty and start an establishment to employ people in other African nations. TV stars d

eserves

Suggestion

deserve

to be rich.

Thirdly

, Celebrities are making so much impact in the world and they deserve to be appreciated and live a better

life

. Imagine a

life

without music, imagine a

life

without fun and entertainment,

this

life

will be too boring. It’s a lot of effort to make people happy and relaxed. A lot a people have been healed just by listening to music and laughing at comedies. They represent the voice of the people in m

ovies

Suggestion

the movies

and relay citizens’ pains and voices to government as well. In conclusion, on-air stars are h

ardworking

Suggestion

hard working

and i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe they deserve to have the money

,

Accept space

,

However

, their e

arning

the excess of revenues over outlays in a given period of time (including depreciation and other non-cash expenses)

earnings

should

also

focus on reducing poverty and make the

life

of people better by contributing to the society by establishing schools, giving scholarships, building hospitals and support so as to make

this

life

a better place to live in.