some people think it is a good idea to wear a uniform at work . Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer with relevant examples from knowledge or experience.

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Some people believe that it is a good idea for all the employees to wear the same
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
and pattern of cloth to work. I
strongloy
with strength or in a strong manner
strongly
believe that it is
such
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a good opportunity for all the
staff
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because it would be easy to recognize them and identify who they are. Employees,
poeple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
who are employed in a company or a ministry should wear the
uniform
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attire to
distinguished
Suggestion
distinguish
them from non-
staff
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. Since
this
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similar
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
and pattern design of cloth, are only
wore
Suggestion
worn
by
staff
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so people won'
t
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be
confuse
Suggestion
confused
about them and it's easier for the customers to approach them.
Although
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
went to a bookshop and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
want to get some help but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
couldn'
t
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find the
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staff
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
stuff
. Actually, the
staff
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was in the
next
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shelf but
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shelf, but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
couldn'
t
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identify him because he didn'
t
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wear the
uniform
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.
Furthermore
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, the
uniform
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outfit wore
by te
Suggestion
by the
byte
employees would cut down the rate at which the customers deceived by the fraudsters. Customers only approach individual who wore a firm's
uniform
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for detailed and payment the items to be
purchase
Suggestion
purchased
.
Therefore
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, buyers will not pay the money to non-
staff
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in a company or shop.
For instance
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, it was reported that a woman was distinguished by a fraudster in a supermarket in
NIgeria
a republic in West Africa on the Gulf of Guinea; gained independence from Britain in 1960; most populous African country
Nigeria
because staffs wear any types of shirt at work. It's very difficult to identify the
staff
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because they wear different clothes.
Nowsadays
Suggestion
Nowadays
, we can see that most of the companies, shops, restaurants, the staffs starts to wear the
uniform
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to
idenfy
recognize as being; establish the identity of someone or something
identify
themselves as
a worker in there
Suggestion
a worker there
. In
connclusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
consolation
, it can be seen that wearing
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uniform
Suggestion
a uniform
uniforms
at work is really important for both people: workers and customers because
nowsadays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
people are cruel and selfish. I think that all the companies should provide some clothes for the
staff
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to wear to make them identify
by
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with
the customers.

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