More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that raising the price of fast foods will solve the problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Obesity is becoming a major issue of the present time because numerous folks are reported as obese due to unusual eating habits. Certain people believe that, if the cost of
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how the problem will resolve. Linking Words
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essay will 70% concur with the above notion, but rest 30% not sure due to people's attitude, Linking Words
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, following essay will discuss how the increasing cost affects the number of people's eating habits and Linking Words
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, why some individual does not concern about the cost.
On the one hand, primarily, the high price of fast Linking Words
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inhibits people from eating due to financial imbalance which can be affected by the wasting money on the unnecessary things. Use synonyms
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, their life would become more fit and fine. Linking Words
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, our forefathers had lived more than 80 years and their average life expectancy was 60 due to healthy and home-made cuisine.
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is due to their wrong nurturing where their lack of information about the health and future problem by their guardian. Linking Words
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, a UK health department study has shown that 70% of children are unaware since childhood about the importance of fitness and Linking Words
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they continue to eat random cuisine which satisfy their cravings. Linking Words
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kind of people are less in number or maybe they are rich so that they can afford it.
In conclusion, As far as I can see, I do not think so, more than 30% people continue to eat unhealthy meals, because of the inflation. Linking Words
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, if the government takes some actions toward the awareness program, Linking Words
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I definitely believe that there ill be a reduction in overweight problem.Linking Words
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