The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph illustrates the amount of
carbon
dioxide
emitted from
a person in four different countries, the United Change preposition
by
Kingdom
, Sweden
, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007 in metric tonnes
.
Overall
, the emission
of carbon
dioxide
in United
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the United
Kingdom
and Sweden
experienced a downward trend, whereas
Italy and Portugal experienced an upward trend. However
, the people in United
Correct article usage
the United
Kingdom
and Italy emitted the highest tonnes
of carbon
dioxide
, while
the smallest emission
is from Sweden
and Portugal.
The average amount of carbon
dioxide
emitted per person in United
Correct article usage
the United
Kingdom
was approximately 11 metric tonnes
and this
started to decrease, and by 1987 it has reached to
10 metric Change preposition
apply
tonnes
. However
, the fall in the emission
continued and by 2007 it has reached to
around 9 metric Change preposition
apply
tonnes
. On the other hand
, in Sweden
the Add a comma
,Sweden
emission
of carbon
dioxide
started with
almost 8.5 metric Change preposition
at
tonnes
and it has sharply increased to about 10.2 metric tonnes
in 1977.
However
, in the next
10 years
there was a rapid drop and Add a comma
,years
this
decrease continued till 2007 reaching about 5.8 metric tonnes
. Whereas
, Italy and Portugal started with around 4.1 and 1.7 metric tonnes
in 1967, which started to increase moderately and by 2007 the amount of carbon
dioxide
emitted was nearly 7.9 and 5.8 metric tonnes
respectively.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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