Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years in the world that many cities now are "one big traffic jam". Do you think that this statement is true? What measure can government take to address this problem?

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Nowadays, more and more people are in desire of buying

car

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However

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this

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trend has brought some problems like

traffic

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jam and it is inevitable to tackle

this

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issue. In

this

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essay I will look at the reasons why

car

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ownership is so popular and propose some solutions for it.

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and foremost, public

transport

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in many countries, especially in developed, is very expensive and as a

consequence people

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consequence, people

decide to buy

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car

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a car

instead

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of using buses or trains. In Norway,

for example

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, people often have to spend 10 percent of their salary on

buses

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the buses

in order to commute to work. The solution is for the government to reduce the ticket prices of public

transport

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. As buses and trains are able to take much more people than cars, they would significantly reduce

traffic

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problems. Another problem is that most people consider cars as the most convenient way to get from A to B.

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is because driving cars

does not need

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do not need

as much effort as travelling on foot.

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, many people go to even small distances like a shopping

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

and restaurant by

car

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. These places

are often swarming

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often swarm

with people and are the main cause of the

traffic

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congestion in city

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

. In my country, it is common to see vehicles on the road that get stuck in

traffic

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, but are full of clothes and gifts. The way forward might be to put

ban

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a ban

on entering these places by any means of

transport

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, except for bicycle.

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will

also

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aid to reduce air and noise pollution and enable people to lead a healthy life. To sum up, cars have some advantages over other means of

transport

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. Travelling by

car

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is cheaper than buses or trains and

it is

it's

easy

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easier

to travel by

car

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than on foot. My view is that the main responsibility for solving

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problem lies with government.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years in the world that many cities now are "one big traffic jam". Do you think that this statement is true? What measure can government take to address this problem?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. To what extent you agree or disagree with this opinion?

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poor countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

People argue that children spend their leisure time differently than it was before, and the main reason fir this is new devises.

Too much emphasis is placed on going university for academic education. People should be encouraged to do vocational training, because there is a lack of qualified tradespeople such as electricians or plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?