Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years in the world that many cities now are "one big traffic jam". Do you think that this statement is true? What measure can government take to address this problem?

Nowadays, more and more people are in desire of buying
car
.
However
,
this
trend has brought some problems like
traffic
jam and it is inevitable to tackle
this
issue. In
this
essay I will look at the reasons why
car
ownership is so popular and propose some solutions for it.
First
and foremost, public
transport
in many countries, especially in developed, is very expensive and as a
consequence people
Accept comma addition
consequence, people
decide to buy
car
Suggestion
a car
instead
of using buses or trains. In Norway,
for example
, people often have to spend 10 percent of their salary on
buses
Suggestion
the buses
in order to commute to work. The solution is for the government to reduce the ticket prices of public
transport
. As buses and trains are able to take much more people than cars, they would significantly reduce
traffic
problems. Another problem is that most people consider cars as the most convenient way to get from A to B.
This
is because driving cars
does not need
Suggestion
do not need
as much effort as travelling on foot.
As a result
, many people go to even small distances like a shopping
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
and restaurant by
car
. These places
are often swarming
Suggestion
often swarm
with people and are the main cause of the
traffic
congestion in city
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
. In my country, it is common to see vehicles on the road that get stuck in
traffic
, but are full of clothes and gifts. The way forward might be to put
ban
Suggestion
a ban
on entering these places by any means of
transport
, except for bicycle.
This
will
also
aid to reduce air and noise pollution and enable people to lead a healthy life. To sum up, cars have some advantages over other means of
transport
. Travelling by
car
is cheaper than buses or trains and
it
it is
it's
easy
Suggestion
easier
to travel by
car
than on foot. My view is that the main responsibility for solving
this
problem lies with government.
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