One of your friends ask you to be a partner in his new business. write a letter to reply him: - give your opinion about your friend's business idea - tell him weather or not you have decided to accept his offer - and explain your reason for this decision

Dear James, I hope

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letter finds you in sheer good health. After mulling over

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your business proposal for a significant amount of time, I decided to revert you regarding it. As

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you told me that you are planning to establish a Multi-speciality Hospital in Noida of hundred beds which will be embellished with all modern facilities

such

as C.T and M.R.I machines and that you want to make me a partner in

this

project.

Firstly

, I firmly believe, it is an excellent notion for the upliftment of your career

however

, considering all the facts, I concluded that it will not be appropriate for me because unlike you, I do not have immense funds to contribute equally

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this

project.

In addition

, I have no business sense

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fact, no one in my entire family has been into

this

occupation. Most of my family members are either Engineers or Doctors just like me and to be a successful businessman, it is mandatory to have sufficient knowledge and experience. Though

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it is not only a tempting offer but indeed a dream of every Doctor to own a Hospital

nonetheless

, I have to state woefully that I do not find myself suitable for

this

responsibility.

Although

, you have huge expectations from me

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I am certain that you will try to comprehend my difficulty. I hope, my decision will have no adverse effect on our robust friendship. I express

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apology for

this

matter. All the best, John