Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught.  To what extent do you agree/disagree?

Acquiring academic
knowledge
through the subject like mathematics, physic, chemistry is very important to get pass marks in exam rather than gaining skills
such
as cooking and dressing
.
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.
In my opinion despites of various significations of
acedemic
associated with academia or an academy
academic
knowledge
, practical
knowledge
is
also
very important so, students should be taught fundamental life skills. On the one hand,
studing
scatter or intersperse like dots or studs
studding
academic
knowledge
is vital for students in many ways.
First
, examination results are very important for students' academic report. With good result, pupils can get scholarship in high school for their
further
study
.
Second
academic
knowledge
on
subject
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the subject
subjects
a subject
like math,
physic chemistry
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physic, chemistry
are very important
for
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to
higher education.
For
example many
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example, many
students from Nepal got fail
marks
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mark
in subjects like maths which was taught in high school. Without a deep
understanging
the cognitive condition of someone who understands
understanding
, many students may fail in
final exam
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the final exam
final exams
and have to
study
these
denotes a person or thing
this
subject again, which is time consuming and costly.
However
, there are vital importance of gaining practical
knowledge
.
For instance
, when college students live far from their family,
then
it is helpful to handle their daily
activites
any specific behavior
activities
if they have
knowledge
of cooking healthy meals.
if
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If
they do not have
knowledge
of
cooking
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cooking, then
then
they prefer to have junk food which is not good for their health. So, it is very important to include practical skill syllabus on
study
curriculum. In conclusion, I disagree that students should only
study
academic subjects because both academic
knowledge
and practical skills are equally important and should be taught at school.
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