The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates a report of the distribution of
visitors
who visited four different tourist attraction spots in Britain during 1999. (21)
Overall
, the number of visitors
was the highest for Theme
Parks
and the lowest for Wildlife Parks
and Zoos. In comparison, the proportion of Theme
Parks
visitors
was the highest at 38%. In details
, almost 50% of total Fix the agreement mistake
detail
Theme
Parks
visitors
saw Blackpool Pleasure Beach. The number of people who visited Alton Towers and Pleasureland in Theme
Parks
were
recorded at 17% and 16% respectively. Change the verb form
was
However
, much fewer tourists, only 10% each, saw Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland in Theme
Parks
of UK
. For Correct article usage
the UK
Museum
and Galleries, the percentage of Fix the agreement mistake
museums
visitors
remained slightly low as compared to Theme
Parks
visitors
at 37%. The proportion of visitors
for
Historic Houses and Monuments was 16% Change preposition
to
while
this
figure was surprisingly less, only 9%, for those who visited Wildlife Parks
and Zoos. (130)
Thus
, Blackpool Pleasure Beach of Theme
Parks
was the most popular tourist attraction spot in Britain in the year 1999. (20)Submitted by furqantaseer.ntu on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, theme, parks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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