The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.

The graph illustrates the

employment

rate

of

both

genders in six

countries

in the

year

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years

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1995 and 2005. (18)

Overall

, the

employment

rate

was the highest for

males

in 2005 and the lowest for

females

in 1995 in all

the

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six

countries

. In comparison, the highest number of

males

was on job in Iceland, at 70% in 1995 and 83% in 2005. The same figure was slightly low for

males

in Switzerland in

both

years.

However

, for

females

, the

employment

rate

increased to around 10% in 2005 in these two

countries

.

Moreover

, the proportion of employed men in Australia and New Zealand was dramatically high in

both

years than women which

were

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approximately 27% in 1995 and around 40% in 2005 in each country. Between UK and USA, the

rate

of

employment

for

both

genders was almost identical in 2005, at 70% and just over 60%.

However

, the proportion of

on job

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males

in

USA

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the USA

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and

females

in

UK

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the UK

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was slightly higher in 1995. (145) In conclusion,

males

dominated over

females

in terms of

employment

for all

the

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six

countries

in

both

years. (18)