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Nowadays people can buy a large variety of household goods, more than ever before in most countries in the world. Is this a good or bad development? Give your opinion and examples

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Today's consumer has more choices than ever. In my opinion,
this
 has benefitted both the consumer and producers simultaneously. The essay discussed these benefits in detail. With the availability of a huge number of options, the competition
among
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between
 the products has
also
 increased fiercely.
This
 has enabled the purchaser to choose the best product at the best possible price.
For example
, the number of
variety
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varieties
 of cereals available in the grocery stores today is beyond any one's imagination. There is something for everybody. If you have a sweet tooth, you can choose the ones with fruits or if you want the
crunch
tender and brittle
crunchy
 ones, you can choose them.
This
variety with
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variety, with
 affordability has been the greatest benefit to the buyer. The advent of
global economy
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the global economy
a global economy
 and seamless international trade has virtually diminished the gap between the producer and user to zero. Fruit kiwi is the best illustration of the same. Not many years ago,
kiwi
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the kiwi
 was not available in many parts of the world, but, today it is available in almost every grocery store in the world. All thanks to the seamless
borderless
 trade between countries. Some people might argue that higher competition has negatively impacted the local producers.
While
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
,
this
 might be true to an
extent but
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extent, but
 if the local producer maintains high quality at good prices, there is no way that he can go out of the market. To conclude, in my humble opinion,
availability
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the availability
 of
large number
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a large number
 of options to the shopper is nothing short of a positive reinforcement to the entire global economy.
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