In some countries, some people are renting accommodation, while others are buying their own homes. Doe renting accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages than buying a place?

Selecting a place to stay and whether to
rent
it or own it is a big decision to make. Many people prefer to own a
house
rather than living in a rented
property
, while there are others who choose to do
to exactly the opposite
Suggestion
exactly the opposite
. I believe owning a
house
has more advantages than renting an
apartment
.
To begin
with, people often
rent
a
house
because purchasing a
property
requires a great deal of money and the skyrocketing price in big cities makes it impossible for many to even dream to own a
house
. These people naturally
rent
an
apartment
. There are many advantages of living in a rented
property
.
Firstly
, the person does not have to pay a huge amount at a time and does not need to pay taxes and bear the cost of maintenance.
Moreover
, they can quickly change the place without giving it a thought, if there is an opportunity
at
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in
the workplace, which requires relocation.
In addition
, the renovation of the
apartment
is the
property
owner’s responsibility and the tenants do not need to worry about it.
On the contrary
, owning a
house
gives a sense of personal achievement that tenants cannot enjoy. A
house
is a permanent asset and with time, its price increases. It
also
gives benefits to the owner if he wants to give it on
rent
, as it will generate a steady income.
Additionally
, the owner does not have to worry about someone is watching what he is doing to the
house
.
For instance
, we had to vacate our
apartment
all of a sudden at least thrice until we purchased our own
house
a decade earlier.
This
is a great freedom, which only
house
owners have.
Besides
, the owner can construct and decorate the
house
the way he likes. To conclude, renting a flat has some
benefits but
Accept comma addition
benefits, but
the overall freedom and monetary compensations
house
owners enjoy are far substantial and
this
is why every tenant dreams to own a
house
someday.

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