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The graph below shows the amount of money spent on six consumer goods in 4 countries. Explain in details

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on six consumer goods in 4 countries. Explain in details
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The bar chart shows the
amount
 of
money
 spent on six consumer goods (photographic
film
, personal stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes,
CD's
Change noun form
CDs
show examples
,
toys
Correct word choice
and toys
show examples
) in four European countries, namely: Germany, France, Britain, and Italy.
Overall
, The British spent the highest
amount
 of
money
 on consumer goods
while
 Germany spent the lowest
amount
 of
money
. Of all sixteens, consumers spent the most
money
 on photographic
film
.
People
 in Britain spent over 170.000
pounds
 on photographic
film
, which is the highest figure shown on the chart.
By contrast
,
people
 in German had been the lowest spenders with roughly the same figures just under 150.000
pounds
 for each of the six products. The figures for spending on toys were the same in both France and Italy at nearly 160.000
pounds
.
However
,
while
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
French
people
 spent more than Italians on photographic
film
 and
CD's
Change the noun form
CDs
CD
show examples
. Italians paid out more for personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfumes. The
amount
 spent by French
people
 on tennis racquets
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
show examples
 around 145.000
pounds
, which is the lowest figure shown on the chart.
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