Reading for pleasure can develop imagination and language skills better than watching TV. Do you agree or disagree?

These days peoples are spending their leisure time
in either watching
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either watching
television or reading. But
waht
what thing
what
weight
is the most
effecitve
producing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect
effective
affective
way of of
speding
the act of spending or disbursing money
spending
free time is reading since it will help
one
to develop their imagination and language skills. I completely agree
to
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with
the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
statement and in
this
esaay
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
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I will support my opinion with examples.
Firstly
, through reading, you can just imagine that you are in that situation and it increase your eagerness and tempt to know what is going to happen
next
if the story is more
intresting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
.
For example
, there is a book
names
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name
"
Wat's
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what's
wats
next
". If
one
start
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starts
to read that book, it will fully take
one
into the story and
one
can start
imagine
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to imagine
imagining
the situation

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • imagination
  • language skills
  • active engagement
  • creativity
  • vocabulary
  • language usage
  • passive
  • simplified
  • dialogue
  • depth
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