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"Some people believe that adults get motivated to exercise and play sports because of the major sports events on TV such as the Olympic Games and Football World Cup. Others say that there are many ways apart from TV to encourage them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."

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Sports events all over the world telecast on
television
, are g
reat source
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a great source
of entertainment. A good portion of people even believes that these events incite them to take part in physical exercise and sports. And there are many, who think apart from sports programs on
television
 a lot of other ways motivate people to exercise as well. Personally, I support the latter o
ne but
Accept comma addition
one, but
in
this
 essay, I will try to elaborate on both the views. Grand sports events like World Cup Football or Olympic Games which are available to view on
television
 sets, reach so many people that no other events can. Watching the fittest human beings on earth, all the regular people start dreaming to become an athlete like them. Despite knowing that it is not practically possible for them,
b
Accept space
,
ut many of them at least try.
Therefore
 sportsmen encourage young adults to be fit like them. From h
air
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a hair
cut to f
itness,
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fit
 following sports celebrities is very common in our culture. Another noteworthy point is, multi-sports events like Olympic or Asian Games, exhibits numerous ways and viewers get ideas which type of sports may suit them.
On the contrary
, most of the adults consider sports events as just a source of entertainment. Though a good number of followers are very serious about their f
avorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
sport their craziness i
s limited
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are limited
within tracking records or collecting merchandise at best. Rather, for exercise, health shows or fitness experts play g
reater role
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a greater role
to motivate them.
In addition
 to
this
, unlike teenagers and children, adults are very aware of the facilities sportsmen get and the routine t
he
people in general
they
follow.
That is
 why matured people do not even try to follow them. They get motivated from people around them, maybe a friend or a colleague with whom t
he
people in general
they
can r
elate themselves.
Suggestion
relate to themselves
 In conclusion, nowadays most of the modern educated adults are health conscious not because they are motivated by watching sports events on
television
 rather they want to live a healthy life following an easy practical routine.
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