Some people believe that media spreads too much negativity in the society that it is harmful for those, who grow up there. So you support the argument. Please discuss

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There are thousands of media channels and they need something to keep the content fresh. Some people argue, that media channels focus on negative news, while others consider it a tool for correction. We are going to discuss both the point of views in detail, and will try to conclude the discussion in a meaningful way. The argument concerning the spread of negativity has been around for quite a long time. Those against it, argues that
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a wide spread of negativity alters our perception towards the society, and gradually the whole
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start accepting negativity as the norm. It
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spreads hopelessness and suppresses the optimistic side of a
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. Psychologists have proven
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in numerous researches, that children take a huge impact of behaviours they see growing up and a small habit developed as a child, stays forever. They claim that negative approach of a society about everything becomes the core part of their personality which ends up developing a lack of trust in everything. Some people supports the opposite and consider it a help for legislative authorities to device a corrective action. They
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think of it as an important source to know what`s wrong and believe that, without knowing something can not be corrected and mark it as an opportunity to protect them from any negative things that can occur to them. Drug abuse,
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, is a typical example of
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claims. Parents must be aware of increased drug usage in
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things, they can never guide their children to avoid it.
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group of people argues that highlighting negative happenings are more important than highlighting the positive news, because the aftereffects of both are entirely opposite. In my opinion, the key to a healthy
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lies in balance. Negative news must not be spread up to a level where people stop believing anything positive, nor it shouldn`t be aware of any bad things happening. What we see today is
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of both, either you will find a state channel in some developing countries claiming that everything is perfect, or some private media targeting some particular segment of the
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highlight only negatives. Media must act a reporter not an opinion maker and that`s a key towards healthy and independent society.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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