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Some people think that to learn a second language well it is necessary to live in a country where the language is being spoken. What is your opinion about this?

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Language
 is something we start learning from the lap of our mother. Some people believe, to learn any
language
 properly, one must live in the
country
 where that
language
 is being spoken either as official or as
native
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a native language
language
. We are going to discuss, why I agree with the statement while analysing the
oposite
being directly across from each other; facing
opposite
 opinions as well.
Language
 is not a
subject
, it is a process. Most of the languages have been evolved over centuries, not years or decades. Every
language
 has
it`s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 own norms, accent and pronunciation. There are rules and
grammer
the branch of linguistics that deals with syntax and morphology (and sometimes also deals with semantics)
grammar
grammars
critereas
, which
can not
can not
cannot
 be taught using books or courses. Let`s consider French as an example, it looks similar to
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 in scripts, as both languages share many alphabets, even words, but these languages are entirely opposite to each other. Sometimes, we understand the meaning of a particular word, but native speakers use it in different context.
Such
 rules of
grammer
the branch of linguistics that deals with syntax and morphology (and sometimes also deals with semantics)
grammar
 and usage of words can only be mastered, if you live among the native speakers. Being bilingual is an
additive
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added
 advantage
to
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for
of
 anyone`s career or even
personel
concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality
personal
 development, and there are many people who believe that, learning any
language
 is possible without even living in
it`s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
country
 of origin. They consider
language
 as a
subject
, and according to them, it is possible to be a professional in any
subject
, as well as
language
. A chemist is never born as a chemist, a mathematician doesn`t learn math in his mother`s lap, they all learn and become professional in their
life time
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
,
hence
 similar path can be adopted for
language
 skills. They
further
 support their argument with examples of people, who have never been in a
country
 but can speak
it`s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
language
 proficiently. I think,
language
 is not an open
subject
, it is usually an honour or pride of a
country
 or tribe,
thus
 no one can speak or understand it better than a native speaker. We do not
need acedamic
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need, academic
need academic
 researches to establish
this
 fact. So, in my
opinion one
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opinion, one
 must communicate with native speakers to learn a
language
 better, and what could be better than living among them.
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