A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Whereas there is a strong opinion that multicultural societies have some advantages upon

monocultural

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ones and are developed faster, others consider

monoculturalism

the doctrine that several different cultures (rather than one national culture) can coexist peacefully and equitably in a single country

multiculturalism

and having a master culture is the only way

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of

keeping and developing a certain cultural heritage. I agree up to the point that in some way a society where one can observe different views on life or

events people

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events, people

become more open-minded and

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, they are not afraid of new discoveries and ways of thinking.

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, the worst drawback of multiculturalism is a tension among different ethnic and religious group, which makes it impossible for the country to be developed. One of the results due to which a city or country is getting

prosperious

in fortunate circumstances financially; moderately rich

prosperous

is a moving different cultural backgrounds people in because of the trading or war.

The good

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The best

example of it is Istambul which contains a mixture of

achitectual

of or pertaining to the art and science of architecture

architectural

heritage of the West and the East

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to Christian and Muslim invasions.

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it, Istambul has always been the world market where

craftmen

a professional whose work is consistently of high quality

craftsmen

craftsman

from all over the world sold their goods.

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city is known to be great and attractive for tourists nowadays as well, due to its multicultural past. In

contast

the opposition or dissimilarity of things that are compared

contrast

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, the negative consequences of multiculturalism policy

are resulted

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result

in riots, strikes and erasing of local cultures. In some cases it can even lead to civil wars or conflicts.

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, today's European

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country's

politicians try to settle refugees from the East to increase local population. Despite of a high level of living standards European families seldom have more than one child, which leads to population

dicreasing

becoming less or smaller

decreasing

. According to the initial plan people of derived cultures, who had immigrated to Europe, should have been assimilated to locals and transformed their lifestyle to European one.

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,

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of learning a new culture, these people started to spread their own, demanding others to live in accordance with their requirements.

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, they ultimately faced with

agression

a disposition to behave aggressively

aggression

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locals, who did not like aliens. To sum up, a mixture of of cultures can be existed if only it has been forming for ages.

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, people need time to get used to each other and work together building up efficient society.

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, cities where a multiculturalism was a norm for centuries, have demonstrated its greatness and development till today.