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Write a letter to put a check on the garbage conditions in the city

#check #garbage #conditions #city
I am writing
this
 letter to offer my help
for
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 the environmental project initiated by you. I am living in central America
from
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past
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the past
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 8 years. Earlier
this
 area is considered to be the
most clean
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 location
of
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in
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 the state.
However
, nowadays due to
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increase
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 in population the
garbage
 issue in the city is catching fire. The streets and gardens look untidy due to
garbage
 all around.
Consequently
,
this
 is giving rise to various health problems. I think we should
,
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 together organize
a
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 awareness campaign to educate people to throw the
garbage
 in
dustbin
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the dustbin
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 rather than leaving them on the roads and parks. By taking some measures we can put a cap on
this
 growing issue. The government should come up with a stringent policy of imposing hefty fines on the people throwing
garbage
 on the streets and in the green belt areas.
Additionally
, more dustbins should be installed in the city to avoid throwing
of
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garbage
 on roads. I hope you will consider my request and give me the opportunity to become part of
this
 project.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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