In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?

There is no open place for
construction
of houses, whose
demand
is increasing rapidly, except
countryside
.
However
, some people argue that it should be protected. In my opinion, I disagree with them and provide reason for building homes in
outskirts
Suggestion
the outskirts
.
First
and foremost, cities have become over crowded due to urbanization and people have only free space in
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
. As more and more people are migrating to cities for better future, and already available space for the
construction
has been used. To meet
this
demand
of land, people are turning to
countryside
areas.
For instance
, in a recent poll conducted in china by real estate firm customers are preferring the
city
surroundings to live.
Hence
, to meet
this
increase
demand
of space moving away from
city
Suggestion
the city
is
good option
Suggestion
a good option
.
In addition
to
this
, if
construction
Suggestion
the construction
is done in the areas away from the
city
we can reduce the negative effects of urbanization. Due to the crowded
city
centre citizens are not only facing the problem of traffic but
also
the pollution.
For example
, in a
city
of south India there is a 40% improvement in air quality which have been observed because of building homes around the
city
instead
of in the centre.
Thus
, to improve the quality of life in an urban
area it
Accept comma addition
area, it
is a better solution.
However
, there should be strict rules in regards
with
Suggestion
to
construction
of buildings with proper ventilation, vegetation zones and spaces between houses in
countryside
construction
. So, to prevent the bad impact of development in those areas. In conclusion, as
population
Suggestion
the population
is
continuously
seemingly without interruption
continually
moving to cities for better prospects; there is
simultaneous increase
Suggestion
a simultaneous increase
in the
demand
for shelters.
Therefore
,
countryside
lands can be utilised for
this
purpose to meet the need and to curb the effects of overcrowding.
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