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Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university to work or to travel.Do the advantages of this outweigh this disadvantages.

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As far as
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 am concerned, taking
gap
Suggestion
a gap year
year
 has several advantages and disadvantages.Nowadays
,
Accept space
,
students usually get a
gap
year
 between school and university.
First
 of all, you can gain opportunities before get into
an
Suggestion
a
 university. There are lots of students who take a
gap
year
.
For example
, America's ex-president Barack Obama's older daughter took a
gap
year
. In just one
year
, she developed her skills and found her passion. She said ''
gap
year
 is my best choice
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 have ever made''.
Furthermore
, it is beneficial for all students to know about yourself. If you think you are complicated to choose your career path, it is better to try it. From
this
 drawback, you
may be waste
Suggestion
may waste
 a lot of time
instead
 you can a lot of things. One
year
 is enough time
to people develop their
Suggestion
to develop their people
 skills. In that case, some students usually spend their time ineffectively. To conclude,
gap
year
 is depending up to you

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